Sadie’s swollen lips
*Inspired by Gustav Klimt’s ‘ The kiss’*
Be the prick
Be the swollen lips
Be the trickle of blood sauntering down her pale leg.
Treat her fragility -with vagile virility – trust in her own common sense.
Let her open up to you
Let her tease you into bed, out layered by peels of laughter.
Perhaps you find yourself lying up looking at her naked body, legs astride your torso in your bed head.
Don’t try to stop her from controlling the ride.
Sadie’s on top
you best stay on her appealing side.
Reason shuts down – arousal highjacks all senses.
an Amygdala orgasm- hands reveal the disguise no pretences.
Light strokes vary speed and pace.
Exposed to surrender at near glimpses of skin covered in see-through lace.
Playful
Cleansed and tainted from the dance of sentients
Sweaty, ruddy bare cheeks, clothes abandoned, sheets ruffled into a dazzling fusion.
Eye to eye contact threatening on impact
Discard pained thoughts numbed by this oxytocin released from incarceration.
Sadie’s initial taunts inspired events such as this audacious body gratification.
Whiskers of petit amours raise to embrace all sensation.
Blood whips around a framework
Frenetic climax into a bewildered orgimi of elation.
Beating hearts enthral Sadie to linger.
All mighty mother nature – gave us each blessed finger.
Sadie gives what she feels can un-ribbon her mask of distrust.
Less than few broke her hymen soul – merging adoration and lust.
Needs fulfilled. Fuck pillow talk.
don’t ask her how it was.
See her eyes, see her smile, see?
Her face won’t betray her mind.
indifferent to praises of technique.
Trust that Sadie’s tasted delicacies never to discover again
Tongue provokes once soft nipples – get it right.
you will know by instinct if this entices her.
Spontaneous love.
All-time suspended from her world,
You may lose yourself too
entangled in limbs.
Sadie need not hear your confession – though she smiles at the gesture.
She knows your lip service is filled with the original grace of binding hymns.
Comely are those creatures features when treated with respect.
Learn to appreciate a woman.
Learn to appreciate art.
Learn what is and isn’t a subject.
Study her until she catches you out
Especially when you least expect it.
A conjurer of a finely dressed tables
in a laboratory with you as her primary objective.
Endowed with abundant pleasure
A pinch of naive seduction
That look, you wonder –what could she be thinking?
Maybe you’re to busy having a good time to think.
Maybe she stops mid-thrust curiosity aroused
Out loud you hear -What are thinking about?
Maybe you fill her with expectations
A moment of temporary heady delight
A moments reprieve from her slumber
Facedown femme fatale floats
Parted lips
Over Imbibed in the river of Styx.
Posted on Dec 15, 2019, in STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS COLLECTION and tagged Creative Writing, Emotions, Feminist, poems, POETRY, Relationships, Stream of consciousness. Bookmark the permalink. 26 Comments.
Oh…my…a side of your writing I’ve never read before. I sense you we’re really inspired by this friend of yours.
Our imagination can tease the reader into something beautiful and heart. π I love this prose. π
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Thank you! I’ve come across a new blogger -poet who inspired me to try something new. I will get the link asap.
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You welcome Daisy.
What inspiration does to the mind, and idea sparks, and billions of stories to tell becomes an art of visual and essence.
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You illustrated that beautifully. π
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Well done, Daisy.
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Aw, Thank you as always, Eugenia. Have a wonderful weekend x
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Another week past by, beautiful messages you posted again.
Wishing you a wonderful weekend, big hug, XxX
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3 thank you xxx Have a fab weekend too
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Really good Daisy π
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Lynne, oh I’m glad you approve. I think I got a bit carried away with this one -ha ha hugs xxxxxx
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It is awesome…perfect. Have a great weekend. Hugs xxx
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you too! xoxxoxox
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It’s so simple when you explain
It’s so complex when internalized
Great post
Excellent work
As Sheldon Always
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Thank you, my friend. Playing catch up at the moment. Someone stole my ph today π¦
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Stole what?
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My phone π£π£
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yw but it is not satistying at all lol
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Why don’t you get out on a date?
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cos i m inept
No u not.
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Excellent Daisy….. Hugs! β€
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T Y , my travelling friend. To have your presence here again is wonderful. xx So happy you are back π
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Pleasure, Daisy. Hugs!
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the jest was the very test
of my young mind
and in being blue balled
american style
the penis
did not help
me tell
they just laughin
at your lust
so soon to dust
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Thanks for that John. Great input ;D
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gasp!
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What? π
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