Societey’s Ills


Sitting with a cup in me hand,rattling my pennies. The wind cuts through my salvation army coat – I feel bare.

Half an hour until the big brother brigade does their rounds, to come  clear off the debris of me, offending society, with my appearance of failure. Glasses fixed on nose bridges to hide poverty’s despicable,  shining glare.

It wasn’t meant to get to this point. I had a home, a family. Believe me, I was a carer. That was many years ago.

I let my parents down. They was ill. They fought a lot. Dyspraxia and Alzheimers is a blinding, rallied up bull  shit way  to steer 30 years of love straight out the front door with a forceful blow.

Pa was getting violent he couldn’t help it – it was the  frustration. The illness works that way . Too much protein in the brain ,the doctor says.

I don’t care much for protein. I just wanted him to get the right meds,  to make him the  man who he used to be

I came home from school one day and the living room had been touched by pa’s hard  handed caress.

‘Put ya fecking glasses on – you thick cow. Turn them around. ‘ere give them to me I’ll show you how.’

Ma was crying. Her perception was off the wire – crazy. Dad went to put on me ma’s glasses and stopped dead in his tracks.

 He had forgotten why he was standing next to Ma- and lashed out – his moves were not shady but he  was hazy.

I couldn’t watch them do this any longer. I had to get out. I wished to start a new life. 16 – find a home I could call me own, addle, get a job and be Miss independent. carefree,sipping on splendour.

I found me a job – I was smart not like them other lasses, herded in like cattle, branded with the letter P. Marked,dotted, scarred, scared, drugged – too skinny to be called slender.

I started washing up pots,owt I could do. I needed a step to reach them. They were that big. I was that short.  The gaffer  he was a bit of twocker- A Tyke.

 He should have been wooing his guests instead of fondling me tits ,grabbing me ass and jerking off with the hand he vowed to his wife to stay faithful with.

I couldn’t take that shit no more. I was no whore. I suppose I could have called me Ma and Pa

I said No. Loud and clear.

Decibels reverberating – Tin Tin like.  I was barking mad.

 Hotel  guests, eating their warm croissants, couldn’t ignore  the tone – it was him that had set that bar.

Didn’t even get me wages. Couldn’t pay me rent. I only had a room but it was my home. A place none could bother me. I could come home kickoff me shoes and read and chill.

 Be at peace.

That were  a few years now. Things change. Time never stops. Drugs, alcohol, overdoses, hospital beds.

None of it worked. I just got older, street smart, I was now living amongst  wild, underfed , hope-starved geese.

No place to shower, they say it takes 3 seconds to make an impression on someone. No jobs – the only job I could get was the hardest graft I ever did.

 Squatting on the cobbles and begging for scraps of bread.



blast me to oblivion ,

 fresh like a baguette- warm ,baked.

 I was safer in  the streets than I was in a seedy local pub.

The pervading scent emanating from these places was  the end of hope and that was my biggest dread. I’d rather  be underground dead.

I got in with some  Christian volunteers – at first, I was in tears. I had Hope, but I had lost faith.

 Pa, he had gone into a state care home and Ma?  well, she had a stroke and I don’t know. It just got harder to think of going back. Mind,  it was me guilt.

At first, it felt like they were recruiting me for their cult. I knew there is no God.  I had seen what mercy truly looked like. Bleak. a dying art.

 I got attacked one night,got meself in a right snicket. I know I wasn’t to blame. Wrong place, wrong time, could have happened to anyone.

 It was me.

Weeks went by , started feeling nauseous, went to A&E – they confirmed what I knew.I was up the duff.

 I knew I had to reach out – me and my child  depart ?   never crossed my mind -not even  from the start.

9 months  passed . The SS got involved – my baby was honey coloured hair and blue eyed. A prize catch ,a  tick off the adoption incentive  target list.

I didn’t stand a chance. They convinced me she’d be better off in another one’s arms.

That toppled me, I came down like a house of cards. Not original but tell it like it is, Bards.

I started living in shared accommodation.Nice people, life been shit. We all make choices – doesn’t make us bad people,right?

I lost the plot, forgot my goals- to become a suited and booted member of society. I had my mobile phone I got  given to me by the charity.

I whip it out. I got a text.

what’s app – it’s free.

Overweening  Lady, with the fine, make up on and pretty, salon styled hair and the sparkly engagement ring. Don’t look at me like that and stare.

Is it so wrong to have a phone and live on the street off and on ? I ain’t got no one to marry me.

”  What prompted this stream of consciousness is obviously the content.  One of the themes of the play is centred around  Homeless people. I saw a man – I presume was homeless the  other day begging for my some money and he was texting with his phone. My first reaction was rather judgemental -so I started asking myself questions and this is the result. The register/style  of speaking and writing  I use is inspired by how some  people in Yorkshire speak. “

About Daisy Willows

'Words are my everything' - Jon Wayne . A writer of poetry, stories, stage scripts, fiction, border line poetry & freestyle works, Music reviews, Guest Features/interview & shout outs. She is also passionate about raising anti-stigma & awareness for Mental Health. A trained co-facilitator in Wellness Recovery Action plan by Mary Ellen Copeland Natasha goes by many moniker names-Daisy Willows, bahtuhkid, GOAT2Bdazee. She has had a colourful life. Travelled. Natasha co-owns a second-hand clothing & accessories business -La Bella Bijoux Ltd Natasha was born in South Africa & is a French national. She currently resides in the UK Natasha Bodley holds a postgraduate in the Humanities. A BA in Myth in the Greek and Roman worlds & Advanced creative writing. She also holds a Foundation degree in Acting performance. She is currently working on her first novel (semi-autobiographical creative non-fiction). She has published one short story on Amazon called 'Number one' Connect with Natasha Collaborate with Natasha & feel free to Communicate her too. Light, Peace & Love!

Posted on Jan 7, 2018, in STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS COLLECTION and tagged , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 64 Comments.

  1. Daisy! Happy New Year my friend. πŸ™‚

    First off, these observation of what you wrote in a stream of consciousness is absolutely incredible, powerfully & visual.
    My eyes felt gripped by everything your words express and mean. Love this post.

    Miss reading your work. Glad to be back home in the blog community. How’s you and your husband doing? Hope all is well, tell him I said hello. πŸ™‚

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    • HAPPY NEW YEAR. I happily single and doing my thing. I’m doing my final year at uni- eek. I don’t seem to have time to blog as much. Miss your work to.. Will pop over – hope all is well with you? settled into your new home, I hope.

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      • what??? Your single?? What happen? If you wish to want to talk to me about it.

        Uni-eek? Wish you well. Everything is well now. My apologies for my long absence. My depression was kicking me. I’m much better now. The new home is great. πŸ™‚

        Daisy, if you need a friend to talk to…you know I’m always here to listen.

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        • Long story. It’s what I wanted. I’m happier with my daughter and my cat and my mates. Sorry about your depression. Hope the new home had a help in lifting the black dog. Thanks for the support as always. I’, always surprised that it is the people with talent who end up being genuine with me. I’m sick of feeding into other peoples egos and feeling shit about myself. This year is about me! lol. Hugs to you and your partner.

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          • Family is more important and you made a good decision. πŸ™‚

            I’m always there and try my best to help and support my friends. I know exactly what you mean about egos making other people feel sick and tiring.

            Thank you…I’ll be sure to let my wife know. πŸ™‚

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  2. I appreciate–and am inspired by–this on so many levels…thank you for sharing your generous spirit, introspection, creativity and humanity…so beautifully expressed! πŸ™‚

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  3. dinadavis2015

    Love your writing. My life’s had a similar trajectory. Anorexia to near death in adolescence & early adulthood. Nearly had my baby taken from me by forced abortion which I managed to resist. Am trying to write a fictional memoir but don’t know where to start. Great to meet you dear Daisy


  4. I love your style of writing.

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  5. You had me believing it was all true, Daisy. I tend to get involved with good stuff, and that I did here too. Can I quote some of it on my Voice posts? Thanks and relieved it’s not you!


    • Hi, Anne. I’m going to have a look at your voice posts. No, it is not me. lol. Thankfully- yeah ,I don’t mind you quoting some of my work as long as you use my real name and pseudonym – daisy Willows/ Natasha Sonia Bodley. πŸ™‚ I hope that is okay. x


  6. The very reason why I live in the room I call home today was because of checking into a homeless shelter. I got lucky as a veteran; most here only get a bed and a few hours a night to use the shelter. And I wonder about those people laid out in front of the Salvation Army at 14th and 7, wonder how similar their stories are..

    A compelling read, needless to say. ☺

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    • WOW! I want to challenge societies misconceptions of why people become and stay homeless. It isn’t just oh get a job , get a house’.

      Thanks for sharing something- so personal with me. I’m in the rough stages of writing stage script. You are obviously under no obligation to say yes but I want to find out some of the challenges/ obstacles people have encountered whilst being classed as homeless / part homeless. I’d like to first personal accounts. If you interested in sharing a bit about your experience you can email me on or I could come up with some questions and you can answer what you feel comfortable. I am passionate about subjects that deal with social change and social consciousness. Have a great day. Sorry, I’ve only just read this post . Everything you discuss would be anonymous. I’m just looking for a bit of insight.. Take care

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  7. See even Robert love this one
    I knew I wasn’t crazy

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  8. Great flow, elegantly beautiful x

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  9. Reblogged this on Art by Rob Goldstein and commented:
    Splendid writing from Daisy in the Willows

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  10. This is good! You’ve got the tone….and the right edge to the language. This has promise!

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  11. This s beautiful
    Very tight
    Great flow
    love the voice

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  12. A powerful and inspiring post. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  13. good day daisy…something deep in you inspired for this post..and it came out very well….


  14. The voice, the emotion, just brilliant, Daisy…

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  15. I wonder whose voice I read this in. So rich with imagery, sad but real. I like this Daisy. Well done.

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  16. Ooo I liked that! Sad story, but told so well. Love reading in the accent! πŸ™‚

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  17. My dear Daisy, I love the start of your story. Excellent stuff. Real feeling for real people. Write on, my friend. You had me sucked right in.

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  18. wwwpalfitness

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  19. Another fantastic post, Daisy! πŸ™‚ I’ve begun a series about a teenage girl on the street, so this post spoke to me. πŸ™‚ Wishing you a beautiful Sunday!

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  20. Rather sad but most insightful. You have a great gift. Hugs. πŸ’žπŸ’ž

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  21. hey tash are you going gladstone on me? no i know . good piece


  22. summer.shines

    Fantastic writing Daisy. Gripping ❀❀


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