A sweep of consciousness
Polish face lifts
immigrants on a striking shift.
Release the scent of the maximum sedative.
How many wrongs make a right in a world indulging in a toupe wearing predictive.
In the slums – she bares her teeth.
rips at her tights.
Hoping to show she can cough up her own weight when she’s challenged to cognac fights.
Be funny!
Be sunny!
Rhyme like a dimer who thinks life is one giant inflatable bunny.
Spring in her step – she waddles a concubine to the left.
Eating her mushy peas and the renmants of a palate once cleft.
oh, come all ye faithful – fish nets, voluminous hair.
All that makeup gunk and dressing attire scream out they live in a world in scenic bare.
Boxed tight in – creativity swivels to an allurer.
Betrayed by the one she led down consciousness – hostile intruder.
Be funny!
Be sunny!
Genuine, inspirational, honesty appeals to an egotists intellect.
How much funk does one consume to come to believe in this deficit?
Character assassination -Emotions maul – pall bearers shuffle on knees.
a clear casket in mind – drunken on herbal skies, the night before the shaman declares he indeed sees.
Truffle this slice with something so nice.
Be happy!
Be funny!
49 kilograms of crystallized heart stacked with genetically modified, combed honey.
Pest in my side. No great thought- a merry flow tilts to contrive.
This is what you get when you reach out for a pair of ears to listen to what you wish others could see through your hide.
Make it a happy ending!
Tortured with teddy bears, candy floss not fit for human consumption
Connect the E numbers – ADHD charged disorderly suspected of the ability to function.
Write what you know.
Know what you write
For old times sake, can’t we just make up and redo introductions without resorting to repeats of historical dramas televised late in the night?
Spirited away from a despicable raven heart that galvanizes.
Bloody, pumped up
clogged up arteries.
Whimsical bird – an indulgent Eliza
Do little.
Timing is everything, nothing, and something.
If she could just make a connection – could she expose the trilogy cycling stationary in the ring?
She gives a damn but it is probably not what you think she has planned.
Convolution confederate.
marvellous toast dictates who should ordain an anthem to strawberry jam.
Drummers in a sweat lodge – chanting druids beating on stones, let the sow lose her intelligent piece of three-year-old jambon ham.
She’s not a funny writer .
She writes what she wants to – it’s weird and it’s messed up but it is fucking fun.
Sanity is a line just beyond the blur – hasn’t it ever occurred to you she writes to live for her?
Posted on Jan 24, 2017, in STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS COLLECTION and tagged Creative Writing, Emotions, STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS COLLECTION, stream of consciousness poetry, stream of consciousness writing, Writing challenges. Bookmark the permalink. 24 Comments.
A stream of poetic genius and such a flow of surrealistic perfection in my book.
Gosh! I love when you write like this…you always inspire me Daisy. 🙂
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T Y my friend, 😀
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You are so welcome my friend.
You make the world a better place. 🙂
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You make me blush! 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Realistically funny. Love it!
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T Y ❤ lovely xx
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this style seems so therapeutic. there are too many wordgasms in here for me to list my favorites. i always have a blast peeking into your mind. by blast, i mean, i understand how it feels to have so much on your mind, and thus, it makes me feel less alienated with all my own bombardments.
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Sam, it is like therapy for me. Them mind can be a busy place- it’s good to let out the chaos. You’re not a lone x
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wow – this is deeply beautiful, like a music melody…I would very much appreciate if like and support my page, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/Mihran.Kalaydjian.public
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Hi Mihran. Thank you for stopping by and reading my post. Checked out your FB page. It’s highly inspirational. Like . Thanks 🙂
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I adore this, I’ve read it twice and get a different “feel” each time. I’ll come back again in a few days for a redo just for fun. Great Post Daisy. ~~dru~~
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I’m glad you like. 🙂
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“She’s weird and it’s messed up but it is fucking fun”. Can’t get any better than that. It’s fun to play.
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nodding my head- yes. yes. yes
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darling they dont even laugh at me jokes!
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then don’t tell any 😀
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hmmm have any relatives in slc ut usa. tom was our punter
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Well written ❤
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Hey B . Thank you – hope all is well 🙂
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Yes and same to you Daisy! 😊
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we made a connection
i am mad and so are you
you love your hubby
and kid too
i kinda love mine
but would rather
shack up
with a new love bunny!
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John, you really are a character! this made me smile- Hope you find a hopper! 🙂
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I like the rymes in your poetry. Ive seen you at other blogs, would really like your feedback on a few or my pieces. Be sure to check out Lardy Arms, Rutjob and Queen Kong and I
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