Will write poetry for love
Found this in my head – I will never be a poet nor claim to be but I am flailing and feeling meh.
So here goes:
I’m supposed to be the one who is feeling strong
Yet, I have got the biggest feeling I am getting it so wrong
Stick by me in sickness and in health,
You have never let me down with all your loving wealth
I feel I have let you down
I don’t need to see no frown.
The truth is as my mind slowly unhinges
The incessant call of sleeping Grimm makes sure it stays on the fringes.
Loud and shrill,
My mind took a detour- scarpered for that biggest hill.
All I want to do is be your deserving queen,
the one that acts out on the things I mean.
To do
to be
Mind is running away after hearing a great big boo.
I am no poet
It’s not hard to show it.
I just want you to know,
even in this state of harrow.
I love you
even when I am stripped of my bow and arrow.
You are my king
with this fact alone –
let it be known that in the end
we will soar,
even if only with one wing.
Don’t even want to own this as my a poem I have written but fuck it. It is mine – it comes from my heart and well……
Heart is all I have got.
Time to move forward.
Posted on May 9, 2016, in POETRY and tagged Beliefs, Creativity, Emotions, Love, poems, POETRY, Relationships, Thoughts. Bookmark the permalink. 30 Comments.
This was just a random attempt? I think you have hidden talent: emotion courses through your poem, and I think some of your word choices and phrasing are brilliant, like: “scarpered” “the incessant call of sleeping Grimm” and “even in this state of harrow” – among others. Do write poetry again sometime : ) (I very much like your black & white photo, too!) ~ Peri
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WOW! Thank you so much! What a wonderful, unexpected comment. I love black and white pictures. Yeah, all my poetry are random attempts. I don’t sit on them for long. I don’t know the academic/theory side of poetry. it is a thing I started doing on this Blog. I have written quite a lot of poetry since. I even have a poetry section now! π THANKS for taking the time to stop by and give me such inspiring feedback.
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It’s beautiful! I’m sure the G-man will love it too.
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really? G loves everything I do but he is biased π ha ha
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Of course he is… π
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“I just want you to know,
even in this state of harrow.
I love you
even when I am stripped of my bow and arrow.
You are my king
with this fact alone β
let it be known that in the end
we will soar,
even if only with one wing. ”
Best lines ever! Great poem π
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aaaw thank you that is so lovely xx
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You are welcome ^_^ I’m following you
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THANK YOU!
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Now I am smiling foolishly. This is sweet and well-written poetess π
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lol π
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i loved this daisy! very good job. xx
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Thank you xx
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The best poems are a flow of emotions from your heart to paper. You did well, Daisy. π
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Coming from you Mary, that is like being knighted π THANK YOU for your input xx
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You make me blush, Daisy. βΊοΈ
The raw emotion you expressed in your poem is more powerful than over-flowery language. I enjoyed…
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It is true though – Fanx for the support Mary! you are a good egg π
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I think it’s starkly beautiful! It’s especially great as it doesn’t mess around with unnecessary big words or metaphor thingies π
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Thank you Anna xxx
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This was good. I started to write poetry back in late October. The more you do, the more comfortable you will get. I will be glad to read any poetry you write.
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Wow .you write like you were born to write poetry. Thanks for your support ππππ
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Good poetry is always from the heart, I believe, and I think you did a fantastic job conveying your feelings and thoughts this way. I enjoyed this brief, beautiful moment reading it so thank you for sharing it π
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Thank your support Annamechelle xxx Means a lot. x
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Beautiful, Daisy! One can ‘sense’ the depth of feeling! As you quite rightly say, this is ‘you’ from the heart! Hugs! β€
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thank you Babushka! π
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Beautiful and courageous poem. There are times when our knowing and feeling don’t seem to match. Closing the gap requires us to be very present …intentionally. To learn and receive whatever it is to be learned and received. Takes time but opens up to richer, wiser times …
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So true what you say about knowing and feelings . wise wordsx Thanks for reading xxx
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Ahh this is so true…. Very well written
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Thank u Ajaz
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Anytmπ
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